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Private Coaching

Chapter 3

Ch. 3 / 30 Jun 19, 2025

Sienna’s POV

Ford Callen moves through the gym like he's collecting evidence for a crime scene.

Most coaches announce themselves—George literally bellows his presence across three zip codes. But Ford? He's in pure stealth mode.

Silent, observing, watching me like I'm a technical problem he's already solved but wants to triple-check his math.

The internal negotiation starts immediately: Ignore him, stick to your routine, don't let some washed-up ex-gymnast mess with your head.

Easier said than done when someone's laser-focused on cataloging every micro-mistake you make.

I'm running beam routines, trying to nail the sequences George drilled into me yesterday, but Ford's presence is like having a critic sitting in your brain. Not hostile—worse.

Completely detached.

Like he doesn't give a shit about impressing anyone, just wants to know what's broken and how to fix it.

Maya slides up during water break with that conspiratorial whisper of gymnasts perfect for sharing drama between rotations.

"He's totally jealous," she says, pressing a bottle into my hands. "Coach Foster told us Ford never bounced back after his injury. Couldn't handle coaching real athletes, so now he's here playing bitter observer."

"What pisses me off is how he just stands there," I say, taking a swig of water. "Like he's collecting data for some psychology experiment. At least George tells you what's wrong. Ford just... staring. It's creepy as hell."

"Right?” Maya nods eagerly. “Like, say something or fuck off, you know?"

"Exactly. The silent judgment thing is so much worse than just getting yelled at. At least yelling is honest."

Here's the thing about George: he saved my ass when nobody else would.

Before him, I was the fragile ‘tinee-tiny 5'2" girl’ coaches looked at and immediately started planning alternative careers for. Too small, too delicate, maybe try dance or rhythmic gymnastics instead of real gymnastics.

At twelve, I had a coach literally suggest I wasn't "built for elite level." Like my body was a design flaw instead of an instrument I was still learning to use.

But George saw something different. Told me I was special. Not just talented—special.

When I tore my ankle two years ago, it wasn’t my parents or my old coaches who fought for me, it was George. He made the calls. He kept my name in the running.

He made sure I stayed relevant.

His methods are harsh? Yeah. Sometimes they sting in ways that have nothing to do with physical training. But they work.

And in gymnastics, results are the only currency that matters.

"Tighten that pass," George's voice cuts across the gym like a blade. "Landing was lazy. You're hesitating, and don't think I haven't noticed your weight creeping up. That's why your timing's off."

The familiar knot forms in my stomach, but I don't respond. These aren't conversations, they're statements of fact from someone who genuinely believes he's saving me from bigger problems.

I've trained myself to hear warnings instead of insults. George isn't trying to hurt me, he's trying to keep me sharp. Focused. Aware of how quickly everything can fall apart if I get complacent.

"You're walking a fine line," he continues. "This routine needs to be competition-ready by next week. Get back on the scale tonight. Track everything. No exceptions."

I nod quickly, swallowing the tightness in my throat. This is how champions are made. This is the price of excellence.

After practice, I stay behind for extra work because I know I haven't been clean enough. Haven't proven whatever I need to prove.

Stay until it's perfect, stay until George would be proud, stay until you've earned tomorrow's training.

That's when Ford materializes beside the beam like he's been waiting for this exact moment.

"Reyes," he says, tone completely neutral. "Your aerial walkover's too vertical. You're killing your speed on the landing. Bring it lower, make it fluid instead of forced."

I pause mid-setup, turning toward him with what I hope is polite dismissal. "My technique's clean. Coach Foster taught me that sequence personally."

His expression doesn't shift at all. No defensiveness, no ego, no indication that my loyalty to George bothers him. He just nods like my response was exactly what he expected.

"Just an observation," he says with a shrug. "Do whatever works for you."

Then he walks away like the conversation never happened. Like it doesn't matter whether I listen or completely ignore him.

The casual indifference is somehow more unsettling than if he'd argued with me.

I stand there, fists clenched, trying to process what just happened. I want to dismiss it completely—chalk it up to professional jealousy or whatever psychological damage Maya claims he's carrying around.

But something about how he delivered the feedback sticks in my head like a splinter.

No pressure, no emotional manipulation, no making it about him at all. Just technical input delivered with the enthusiasm of someone reading a grocery list.

And I hate that it's rattling around in my brain.

I've spent years training myself to tune out doubt, second-guessing, alternative opinions that could derail my focus. You have to in this sport.

Every coach has their own version of perfection, and none of them agree on what it looks like.

Ford doesn't know where I came from or what I've sacrificed to stay on this path. Doesn't understand the ecosystem George and I built together, the trust that carried me through injuries and setbacks and moments when quitting would've been easier.

So I push his words out of my head, reset my position, and launch into the sequence again.

But something shifts. Something subtle in how I approach the aerial, a slight adjustment I tell myself is coincidental. The landing feels different—smoother, less jarring impact that usually leaves my ankles screaming.

Fuck.

The change didn't come from George's voice in my head. It came from Ford's casual, throwaway observation delivered like he was commenting on the weather.

I reset and try again, this time deliberately using George's original technique. The landing feels off—too much vertical force, exactly like Ford said.

I switch back to the adjustment, and it flows better.

Double fuck.